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It's pretty cool.
Only thing that stood out for me as something i didn't like, was the clap. I don't know why, but it was just a bit distracting.

Other than that, it sounds like a pretty basic arrangement. Not something that will change the world, but it would probably be ideal for the background of a game or something similar. Which might have been what you were going for

demon1000 responds:

Hmm i see your point...Anyways Thanks For the review Man!

Sounded great to my ears!
Loved the drumbeat, made me think someone could make a sweet breakcore remix of this.
I, for one, actually liked the piano. It was very ambient, and it made a good base for the other instruments. Particularly the drums. I love the drums...
only complaint as mentioned before: drumline at 1:50 is a bit too weak. I honestly don't think it does much for the song, maybe if it was a bit louder.

Apart from that, great tune. Did i mention the drums? I love the drums...

This is actually great! Love the main melody, and the way it works together with the other instruments.

The only thing i don't love is the melody starting around 0:37. I feel like it sounds a bit weird together with the chords, I feel like this might be intentional, but I would have preferred something a bit more straight-forward here

Again, only minor complaint, there's no way i can give this anything but 5 stars!

demon1000 responds:

Wow Thanks Man!

It's pretty good!

A few things:
In the beginning, the piano seems a bit too loud. Either that, or the pad is a bit too quiet, because i feel like the piano stands out a bit too much.

However, since the piano is so much in focus, it sounds a bit weird when it then quite suddenly disappears, and the bass doesn't really feel like it does the same job. Same thing when the bass drops out and the piano returns. I would have loved to see a bit with them both playing at the same time.
Other than that, nice song, I enjoyed it! loved the ending. 4 stars.

Thought it was great! I really had a hard time finding something to criticize. I did find a couple of things, but they are very nitpicky...

At around 1:31:
I really like the melody-thingy before this, but after this it gets a bit drowned out, and I don't think the new lead-thingy is interesting enough to replace it. It feels like something is missing to give it the extra punch.

Around 3:24:
The build up is so intense, but I feel like what follows doesn't quite live up to the intensity of the build up. Like, when your build up "builds up" so much anticipation, the part that follows should completely blow me away, and I don't feel like it quite manages to do so.

Again, very nitpicky, it's very minor complaints. And I also apologize for the vague description of the instruments, hopefully it's not too confusing XD

Pi0run-V responds:

I think, I understood you enough ;)
Thanks for review!

Aw, this is a neat little thing! Keep it up!

There's a few things that could be improved. I don't really like the drums, and the piano seems a bit out of place.
Apart from that, most things work! Love the bass

This sounds very solid! The only thing i think could make it better, is that there is nothing that like blows me away, on top of that very solid base. Like, there's nothing that would make me go: "oh yeah, i want to go back to this track because of this particular thing".
This would however be perfect as background to a video game or something similar, since what it has is really really good

Great stuff! Like your stuff so far.
I do think the song is a bit too repetitive for my liking. While the instruments change quite a bit, there's not much melodic variety, which might have been fine, if it wasn't for the fact that the song goes on for 4 and a half minutes.
Also i don't like the fact that you love winter. What's wrong with you?! :P

TheSubfrost responds:

I'm scrambled in the brain, that's why I like it. I just love snow and cold weather for no logical reason haha.

Yeah, I should've added more variety, and I'll keep that in mind on future songs. Thanks!

That was really interesting! I could definitely see this being used for something cool. Works great on it's own as well.
My only real complaint is that i think the bass should be a bit more up front. Like, it's quite interesting, so i think it should stand out a bit more, possibly simply by being louder!
But it's really quit good as it is! I almost feel bad for pulling the average down, but it's not quite perfect ;-)

TheSubfrost responds:

I see what you are saying, but I felt like it would've been too repetitive if I would've made it louder. Thanks for the review!

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