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It's pretty cool.
Only thing that stood out for me as something i didn't like, was the clap. I don't know why, but it was just a bit distracting.

Other than that, it sounds like a pretty basic arrangement. Not something that will change the world, but it would probably be ideal for the background of a game or something similar. Which might have been what you were going for

demon1000 responds:

Hmm i see your point...Anyways Thanks For the review Man!

This is actually great! Love the main melody, and the way it works together with the other instruments.

The only thing i don't love is the melody starting around 0:37. I feel like it sounds a bit weird together with the chords, I feel like this might be intentional, but I would have preferred something a bit more straight-forward here

Again, only minor complaint, there's no way i can give this anything but 5 stars!

demon1000 responds:

Wow Thanks Man!

Thought it was great! I really had a hard time finding something to criticize. I did find a couple of things, but they are very nitpicky...

At around 1:31:
I really like the melody-thingy before this, but after this it gets a bit drowned out, and I don't think the new lead-thingy is interesting enough to replace it. It feels like something is missing to give it the extra punch.

Around 3:24:
The build up is so intense, but I feel like what follows doesn't quite live up to the intensity of the build up. Like, when your build up "builds up" so much anticipation, the part that follows should completely blow me away, and I don't feel like it quite manages to do so.

Again, very nitpicky, it's very minor complaints. And I also apologize for the vague description of the instruments, hopefully it's not too confusing XD

Pi0run-V responds:

I think, I understood you enough ;)
Thanks for review!

Great stuff! Like your stuff so far.
I do think the song is a bit too repetitive for my liking. While the instruments change quite a bit, there's not much melodic variety, which might have been fine, if it wasn't for the fact that the song goes on for 4 and a half minutes.
Also i don't like the fact that you love winter. What's wrong with you?! :P

TheSubfrost responds:

I'm scrambled in the brain, that's why I like it. I just love snow and cold weather for no logical reason haha.

Yeah, I should've added more variety, and I'll keep that in mind on future songs. Thanks!

That was really interesting! I could definitely see this being used for something cool. Works great on it's own as well.
My only real complaint is that i think the bass should be a bit more up front. Like, it's quite interesting, so i think it should stand out a bit more, possibly simply by being louder!
But it's really quit good as it is! I almost feel bad for pulling the average down, but it's not quite perfect ;-)

TheSubfrost responds:

I see what you are saying, but I felt like it would've been too repetitive if I would've made it louder. Thanks for the review!

Sounds good! I like the song, the production is not perfect in my opinion, but very close! (i can't really put my finger on what it is that i don't like, but everything seems a bit "too much". Like everything is a bit in your face. Sorry i can't be more precise!)

Phonometrologist responds:

Hey you're new. Thanks for stopping by. Yeah this is far from perfect as I still have a viola and background vocals to add to this. It would be silly to completely mix and master this now without those elements. The fact it might seem a bit too in your face could be the fact that the vocals are mixed in a country approach where it's louder than everything else. Or the two instruments (piano and ukulele) don't have much reverb. Eventually when all the parts are recorded, I should try to make things a big more cohesive.

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